Just as the title states. Infact, it is still very much WIP, but thats the perfect time for feedback! There is no hook...yet. But the beat is pretty much done, as well as the verse/verse's. Fire away! http://www.reverbnation.com/redefenition/song/17918588-better-daysshort
Like with the last one, the beat is awesome. But I don't like this one as much as ''On To The Next One'' (sorry, no numbers... ). Mainly 'cause it just feels like you're reading the lyrics, not much of emotion. But still, the beat is the most important and it's good. Solid track.
I like you, you are very honest! I can definitely agree that the performance captured isn't ideal. I'll rerecord it when I have a hook to go along with it. But the instrumental, was made 70% out of ipad sounds. Free apps are so underrated, you can get GREAT sounds from them. Check this out, if you will! https://soundcloud.com/re-defenition/read-between-the-lines Personally I think thats my favorite instrumental that I've ever made. Ridicule away! Or tell me how awesome it is while rubbing my