Artwork A Drop of Twilight

I am redoing this piece. I really l like the idea and wanted to bring it to life more. Here is the original...



and here is what I have so far for the remake. I'm sketching it out first...what do you think so far?

 

Well here is what I have so far....I hope you like it!

 

I got some work done...it's in Acrylic and it's on a 30 x 40in canvas...what do you think so far?

 

"complete"

 

I like how simple it is but I prefer it if it looks like a young lady.

 

Great job!

 

Your art is so cool, very creative.