Dissolve My conscience is where I hurt When every other part of me feels so good And now that I am alert I am achieving all that I ever could But now I’m laying here Watching this all dissolve I have this intense fear That everything is my fault I don’t understand my pain I’m not sure why I hold it deep inside me I just need to leave the rain And just hold you close to me, right beside me But now I’m laying here Watching this all dissolve I have this intense fear That everything is my fault But now I’m laying here Watching this all dissolve I have this intense fear That everything is my fault I don’t understand what this world has to offer me And every single day just seems like a test to me I’m faced with these crazy challenges that I lose And no matter what I do I can’t seem to choose Which path I should take that will lead me right to you So that I can spend my life by your side with you But now I’m laying here Watching this all dissolve I have this intense fear That everything is my fault My conscience is where I hurt I’m not sure why I hold pain deep inside me And now that I am alert I just want to keep you close, right beside me I don’t understand my pain When every other part of me feels so good I just need to leave the rain ‘Cause I’m achieving all that I ever could But now I’m laying here Watching this all dissolve I have this intense fear That I will lay right here To watch it all dissolve With this, my burning fear That everything is my fault That everything is my fault Everything is my fault It’s all my fault Forgive me
I haven't been in the 'writers cove' section in ages..!! But anywho, I liked your structure to it, it's clean and has a point.. I especially liked the last verse.. ^^