The Ending Night

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    Alacrity

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    Alacrity, Jun 2, 2004



    And every night we screamed out hearts out
    Could become a sunset we shared
    And every unanswered call to me
    Could become a night we spent together
    And every time we said goodbye
    Could've been an awesome concert we went to
    Then maybe you'd be here with me right now
    And not a darkened night in the past


    Comments appreciated, thanks to Nate for help with the title :)
     
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    Blaze

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    Blaze, Jun 2, 2004



    short pretty and sad very nice

    7/10
     
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    arT saveS, Jun 2, 2004



    I love it, though I'm not big for love poems. It was very good! 9/10
     
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    Alacrity

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    Thanks :blush:
     
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    I like it. Very good! :)
     
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    tkd_rap, Jun 3, 2004



    nice, short poem, 6.9/10!!!!!!
     

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