A Mi Amor

Su mi amor, mi vida, el aire que respiro
Sus brazos, I de largo a bajar en
Y como el sol fija, el cielo da vuelta al azul
El centelleo en su ojo, me fija libre
Su sonrisa, el tacto blando de sus labios

Translation:

(Your my life, my love, the air I breathe)
(Your arms, I long to fall into)
(And as the sun sets, the sky turns blue)
(The twinkle in your eye, sets me free)
(Your smile, the tender touch of your lips)

 

I like it a lot. It's quite short, but still good. I also like how you have it in spanish.

 

Yeah, I transalted it..I wanted to write something romantic for my girlfriend and I think I pulled it off

 

Cool, I like it. 9/10.

 

Way to go Jamie! It's very cool.

 

you definately did

 

Yeah...I think so too..and the response from her was great

 

It's so beautiful.
Your girlfriend is so lucky.

I wish someone would write something romantic for me one day.

 

yeah.. yeah...

 

This is great... It's really romantic. Awesome job.

 

If someone wrote something this romantic for me, I'd die!!!! no one likes me, so somethin like this would be quite a shock!!! Oh well, I don't have to worry about dying cuz it wont happen. No one would ever do that for me... But great writing!!!

 

Yeah, writing it in another language looks more romantic. Good job though.

 

Thanks