Dear Diary

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    Jamie

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    As this signal sends
    Chilling thoughts up and down my spine
    I can see me standing there
    Watching the bloody drip down your face
    I hope this is not how its going to end

    Dust falls to ashes and ashes turn to rain
    Smothered by confusion as the head numbs the pain
    Can’t feel you breathing but I know that you’re near
    Just one living entity but two living in fear

    The time has changed
    For better or for worse
    Now I see the notes scrawled
    Up and down your arms
    I can see me standing there
    Watching the blood drip down your face
    I hope this is not how its going to end

    Dust falls to ashes and ashes turn to rain
    Smothered by confusion as the head numbs the pain
    Can’t feel you breathing but I know that you’re near
    Just one living entity but two living in fear

    We watch the shadows fall
    And we’ll only take the blame
    For these figures cloak the walls
    As the spirits call my name…

    Dust falls to ashes and ashes turn to rain
    Smothered by confusion as the head numbs the pain
    Can’t feel you breathing but I know that you’re near
    Just one living entity but two living in fear

    We dont chose this path for us to follow
     
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    Brilliant, as usual. :)
     
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    Jamie

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    Cheers.

    I have to give some credit for the help on the chorus and bridge.. That goes to Zahra (aka BloodOnTheDashboard)..I dont think she comes here anymore though
     
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    BloodOnTheDashboard

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    yes i do! ta-daaaaaa! and thanks jamie good work.


    Dust falls to ashes and ashes turn to rain
    Smothered by confusion as the head numbs the pain
    Can’t feel you breathing but I know that you’re near
    Just one living entity but two living in fear

    that bit and

    We watch the shadows fall
    And we’ll only take the blame
    For these figures cloak the walls
    As the spirits call my name…

    that bit is mine for all of you who didn't know B)
     
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    Dean

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    Your part is very good, Zahra, and Jamie is a consistently excellent writer.
     
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    Messy Marj

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    WOW. That is simply amazing! Good job Jamie and Zahra! :thumbsup:
     
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    Zahra and Jamie, :eek: :eek: this is so beautiful!
     
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    Very nice, you write well.
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot...
     
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    Omar A

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    Very Awesome :eek:
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks Omar ;) :D
     
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    don't do this

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    Good work ;)
     
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    Madi

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    Wow, too good for words.
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot.
     
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    YAY_we're_doomed!

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    dude you're too good!
     
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    Jamie

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    Erm...thanks
     

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