Our Love Will Never Die

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    Vampire

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    Our Love Will Never Die

    Row, row, row my boat
    Gently out to sea
    You want me to try to be on my own
    But I find myself rowing back to thee

    I can’t pinpoint my location
    What exactly is my next destination?
    You were my navigator
    Now I’m lost

    I can’t get past icebergs of memories
    That I fear will melt over time
    Will I hit too many and finally collide?
    If I drown in them, will you save my life?

    Our relationship is out there somewhere
    A massive mountain in the sea
    After all our storms and tribulations
    My hope is the mountain stays standing

    We keep saying goodbye
    Because I’m afraid to try
    Without you as my lifejacket to keep me secure
    New waters scare me unlike familiar shores

    You’re out there exploring new horizons
    As I remain stranded and pondering
    The sunset burns my eyes
    Your love is always haunting me

    When I look into your eyes
    My perseverance grows inside
    Because I feel our boats will collide
    And we’ll build a ship for our love to reside

    We can sail the seas as one once more
    I’ll be waiting sunken on the ocean’s floor
    And you can find the treasure that was once yours
    And that is our love that will forever endure
     
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    that is really good...wow! (w00t)
     
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    Friskey™

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    Really interesting!
     
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    I'm glad the two of you enjoyed my piece. Thank you.
     
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    two words Bad @ss these lyrics work great as either singing or rapping lyrics. I rapped them to Step Up's beat just for fun. There great I'd give them a 9.9 if they were being rated.
     
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    Wow, I never had someone tell me they were great rap lyrics, haha. Thanks a lot for your comments. ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Really interesting and different, well done mate
     
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    I appreciate your comment. Thank you.
     
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    No problem :) and do please post some more
     
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    I'll post a new piece within this hour. Be on the lookout! :)
     

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