random songs

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    gazzalp

    gazzalp Active Member

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    Havent posted here in a while. Anyway ive got some new songs, most arent finished but anyway. These make alot more sense to me though because in my mind i know how they are meant to be sung.
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    Its all you

    Im a prisoner in my own mind
    No one else knows whats going on
    On the outside i might seem fine
    But its whats inside that feels so wrong

    CHORUS:
    You sometimes look at me
    and wonder what my problem is
    Go take a look in the mirror
    and it will stare directly at your face
    Dont come back now
    youve already done, enough damage

    ive walked down this road before
    and now its falling apart
    i trip over the uneven surface
    Dont think ill be getting up

    So I look to the sky
    and see what my future holds
    its all black and white/
    Ive never felt this cold

    Truer words have never been spoken
    Yet im wondering why all those promises were broken
    Cant you see what your doing
    Your killing me inside
    With all your fucking lies

    CHORUS:
    You sometimes look at me
    and wonder what my problem is
    Go take a look in the mirror
    and it will stare directly at your face
    Dont come back now
    youve already done, enough damage

    Youve taken me, from riches to rags
    im going away ive packed my bags
    Ill sleep in the street
    but away from here
    anywhere close to you
    it will end up in tears

    You want me back now
    you cant control your problems
    maybe if you didnt try to control me
    you wouldnt have a problem in the first place
    in the first place.....in the first place/
    Go take a look in the mirror
    and tell me what you see

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    My life was like a rollercoaster
    My problems like a carousel
    Everytime i tried ot stand i fell
    only to look up, and see you looking down at me
    laughing at me, its all the same
    since you came, hasnt changed

    Just when you think it won't happen to you
    Someone decides to end your life
    No chance to do the things you want to do
    No time to say what you want to say

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    How can I trust myself anymore
    Now that I've trusted you
    Your going down
    and your taking me with you

    Im laying on the ground
    A place ive been many times before
    Only happens when your around
    i cant afford..... to be kicked over and over

    One day you might see
    how your killing me
    might as well get the headstone
    unless that day comes soon
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    your not here anymore
    things were much better the way they were before
    i see your picture in my head
    i feel the emptiness in my hand
    the soft touch of your hand in mine
    I see you so clearly
    so why can't i bring you back to me
    you never stepped out of line
    you'd do anything for anyone
    so why did you have to leave
    im drowning, not able to breathe

    I didn't get to say goodbye
    if only i could turn back time
    Although you weren't here for too long
    I've still got all the memories
    of the times we spent together
    It's as if we'd known each other forever
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    Can't see through this mist
    built up like scar tissue
    is it me, or am I dissilusioned
    looking into a mirror but see no reflection
    all this time i've been so afraid
    with the thought of the mistakes I made
    im living life on my knees
    the feeling of getting nowhere

    The anger's found out by the fear
    the screams drowned out by the tear
    as it drops so does the facade
    and the pain can seep into the skin
    and release the life within

    CHORUS
    Ill take all these feelings
    and bottle them up inside
    Cause i dont know what else to do
    think ill just run and hide


    (Add two verses, dont know them yet)



    Ill take all these feelings
    and bottle them up inside
    Cause i dont know what else to do
    think ill just run and hide
     
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    notneo

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    Thats some pretty good stuff . No change that . I like what you have written.
     
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    gazzalp

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    Thanks for the reply, but as i said makes more sense to me because i know how it should sound.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Sounds pretty good.
     
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    gazzalp

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    Thnaks for the reply.
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    :lol: hey! have you recorded that? cuz i'd like a copy! sounds great! :D
     

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