Destruction in my heart

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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    Its my past that reveals my deep pain,
    Inside out you can see me, clear as rain..
    Transparent but I have my own dull glow that shines beneath me,
    I can't find the words that I search for so deeply,

    Would you love me as you said you would?
    I feel lonely and so badly used,
    By your childish love that tore me part by part,
    I feel dead as if you choked my breathing heart,

    (Chorus)
    Suffering and suffication
    Despair is destruction
    Crying goes on
    Black blood on the run,

    Would you notice me dead?
    Probably not but soon ill be lying on my death bed,
    I cut my throat,
    As I was writing my death note,
    You will regret,
    Your disrespect,
    Sometimes I don’t make sense to you,
    But is this clear enough?
    WE ARE THROUGH!!!!

    (Chorus)
    Suffering and suffocation
    Despair is destruction
    Crying goes on
    Black blood on the run,

    You killed me, in your torturous way?
    I will haunt you tomorrow just like I did today,
    You haven’t met pain until you meet me sweetie,
    But don’t worry its all over hunny,
    I am a nightmare come alive,
    This is the end no more lies!

    R&R
     
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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    Since i didn't write in such a long time and i had to this quick i would want some comments about what you think about it...
    thx ^_^
     
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    Amanda

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    Pretty Good. I like it alot.

    But don't double post. The Edit Button is your friend.
     
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    bleeding rose

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    lol sorry about that... :p -blame it on my cp...it has bad memory lol -
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    That's ok just try not to do that again, anyways you did a really good job.
     

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