Slaves of Hypocrisy

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Trapped in a state of constant confusion
    Embracing the insanity the beckons
    To me

    Wrapped in a warm cocoon of lies
    Not understanding what went wrong
    With a secure trust
    Betrayed by a lust
    That came here for the danger

    Running from a past she didn't take part in
    But watched miserably from the sidelines
    Longing to be the centre of attention
    Now look at her
    Running for her life

    Slaves of hypocrisy
    Don't you try to dominate me
    I can see you
    On the other side of my mirror
    Taking over my reflection
    Screaming at me

    Ensnared by the nets that caught her
    Mesmerized by the runaways that bought her
    Promised to erase her sins
    No scars on her young, beautiful face
    None to see

    Abandoning a paranoid nation
    Avoiding the clutches of oblivion
    Trying to outrun prejudice
    The ones who follow
    Prejudiced culture





    Ah, this is getting too long, I've gotta wind it up, but there's so much more to tell, can anybody suggest? Feel free to add one or two stanzas, or sentences...in fact, I'm beggin' you to...?
     
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    fallenangel

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    damm, i can't! it's too damm good to be messed with. i just don't have enough talent to match yours! maybe someone else can...
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Great stuff.
     
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    getting better everytime
    keep it up
     
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    Luke

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    2 words: Fucking Good
     
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    Testament

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    Daaaaaaaaamn.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Thank you all!
     
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