My story!

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    Shinoda_baby

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    Im really angry what Todd said about my story being pointless when it was a first person story I did so I put myself as Mike for a day.
    And he closed it!
    Im really upset cos it was my computer assignment which I got top marks for it.
    Why is it pointless?
    I want to it to be unlocked.
    Because people asked for my works on here.
     
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    Mark

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    Fantasies in the life of bandmembers are frowned upon, as you've undoubtedly come to learn the hard way. It's teenie-ish activity.
     
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    You got top marks for THAT?

    :mellow:
     
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    Shinoda_baby

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    Its a fan story! is that not allowed?
    is my story not creative ??
     
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    Glenn

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    Writer's cove is for poems and stories with at least some intellect. What you wrote is a pretty immature 'story' and is best left off the boards.
     
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    Shinoda_baby

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    Im only in Year 10.
     
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    why can't you leave it up to the lpa members to decide what they think of the story?
     
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    Im only in Year 10. [/b][/quote]
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    and you double posted there, honey.
     
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    First off, dont double post. Secondly, I think in this thread alone you found how how the members feel. ;)
     
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    Glenn

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    why can't you leave it up to the lpa members to decide what they think of the story? [/b][/quote]
    well...alright, I'll let other members post here whether the story has any intellect whatsoever, but I'm pretty positively sure they will agree with me.
    Edit: This has pretty much already been decided.
     
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    Mark

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    The LPA members, namely the staff, decided it was pointless. No need to make a big fuss out of it.
     
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    Im only in Year 10. [/b][/quote]
    that explains alot....
     
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    that explains alot.... [/b][/quote]
    Judging by the way you type, I wouldn't be the one to make fun of other people's intelligence. ;)
     
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    Judging by the way you type, I wouldn't be the one to make fun of other people's intelligence. ;) [/b][/quote]
    Buuuuurn baby burn!
     
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    Danielle

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    Is that year 10 in the UK?
     
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    Judging by the way you type, I wouldn't be the one to make fun of other people's intelligence. ;) [/b][/quote]
    :lol:

    I love irony.
     
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    Nikki

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    So basically, the point of this thread was to show you that you suck at writing, basically.

    Can I just ask what subject was this for? Because if it's English then your teacher needs a good slapping and a course on the whole of KS3. There's just no way that that could have gotten full marks
     
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    NickelNine

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    Why is this topic still circulating and getting posts? Honestly, it needs to be closed.
     
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    Evan™

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    :lol:

    I love irony. [/b][/quote]
    at least im starting to stop using the shortcuts in my typing and the ocassional bad spelling error....but ironic none the less...
     
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    Nikki

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    It's not closed because SB wanted comments on her story and they're being posted here
     
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