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Erm...well...it took me about 5mins to write this but hey here goes:-

'Punk', 'Greebo', 'Geek',
'Nerd', 'Weirdo', 'Skater', 'Freak',
'Ya Mum', 'Ya Dad',
What the F***?

A label,
A name,
No longer a game,
Only a few,
Take S*** like you,
Until then.

SNAP, like a stick,
you feel so sick,
You fly,
You kick,
They Scream.

Don't Label me...


:whistle: :wth:

 

i like it

especially the first verse

very good

 

THAT'S HOMEWORK ?!

i wish i had to do stuff like that

PS: i think it's great a specially cause it's not to long and complex but it sais very much

 

You said it all.

 

I read it and i was like "WTF" is this,


It's great!

I don't know what you where smoking when you came up with it but i like it. It is very spontainious, original and different from what we normally get around here, it may not be for everyone but i liked it, keep it up.

 

thanks guys *wipes saw dust of screen* stupid bed.......

it wasnt homework, it was classwork!!

 

that's cool "classwork" then i wish i would have to do stuff like that IN school