Shut up I know what you're thinking when you look at me Like that Shut up I know what you're saying when you talk to me Like that Why do you not understand I offer you the chance to see I try as hard as I possibly can You take the opportunity to scream at me I try to make myself Your perfect ideal But you don't understand So I'm breaking the deal With the devil, I know That you don't really care Like with your soul, I know That it isn't really there You say that I'm running From the responsibilities I hate But I'm not running, I'm hiding Till it's finally too late I'm gonna hide till you're done looking I'm gonna cry till no more tears I'm gonna run till you're done searching I'm gonna scream till no more fears Deny me what I need When I know that I deserve it Give me freedom, time to breathe Maybe I'll finally understand it You watch me with eyes of steel Hear me with ears of stone Hold me with arms of iron That will never let me go I'm trapped inside a broken home Doors locked and windows barred My body flawless, beautiful My soul, withered and scarred Mind flying away while You scream and torture me My soul rising above the clouds I'm not listening I'm gonna hide till you're done looking I'm gonna cry till no more tears I'm gonna run till you're done searching I'm gonna scream till no more fears Wishing sometimes for a gentle gaze Warming me from inside But with your cold view from above All I want to do is hide Once woke up to a loving embrace And thinking it was real I turned around to see the face But it was just a dream In the beginning I used to apologize But now I know that I'm not wrong Always made me feel so goddamn guilty Looking for the innocence I longed To be wonderfully perfect To be positively fantasy To be beautifully unreal So that you would love me I'm gonna hide till you're done looking I'm gonna cry till no more tears I'm gonna run till you're done searching I'm gonna scream till no more fears I know I've posted this before, but thanks for sticking it through.
the person's so screwed, man... :wth: :whistle: great job...love it...it's beautiful...i love the way the titles of your poems are repeated in your works...it's amazzzzing!!
I agree completely. He was dissing everyone on some other topics. Head isn't screwed on tight enough. Thanks I usually have titles related to the poems, it's easier. You too, keep writin' the greats..
another good one torn rose! me likey alot! did i post a comment on this before? i know i'v read it before but i can't remember if i replied to it. so i though i would reply to this topic, just in case... (glad to see that person has been baned now!)
Thanks! I don't know if you've posted on the first version on this, but thanks for posting on this version . IT'S -note the use of it- been banned? -does snoopy dance- Oh. That's too bad.
hey mali sorry i didn't write before -didn't have time- but anyways this poem rocks!!! its amazing -its like on of your best ever- wow...u put so much anger into this...which you usually i just wana say that i love can't wait for the next on I'm gonna hide till you're done looking I'm gonna cry till no more tears I'm gonna run till you're done searching I'm gonna scream till no more fears-- btw i loved this part...
Hey all, m sorry i 'aven't been replying for a while, it's just that i haven't had internet access for about a week and the one that i do have now is butt-slow so i'll only be able to post about once or twice every one to two weeks thanks for everyone that's posted happy is me.