And Cry

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    There are days when you can’t seem to bring the knife to your wrist
    There are days when you still your breathing afraid that someone might hear you
    There are days when you feel that you might as well break down
    And cry

    There are nights when you think you could finish the entire bottle
    Just to get some sleep
    There are nights when your foolish worries from the past resurface
    And keep you awake
    There are nights when you want to lie down, close your eyes
    And cry

    The times when you wanted to forget all about it
    And cry
    The times when you tried so hard to summon the emotions
    And cry

    Why won’t the tears fall?
    You remember a time when all you had to do was open your mouth to form a word
    But you would break down
    And cry

    The years you waited for to pass by so that you could finally let go
    And cry

    The months you searched for the key to your mouth, so you can breathe in
    And cry

    The weeks you waited for news from the doctor as to why you cannot relax
    And cry

    The days you spent curled up tight clutching your pillow, trying to close your eyes
    And cry

    The hours you lay in a dreamless sleep, wanting nothing more than to wake up
    And cry

    The minutes you stared at your reflection, not blinking, hoping to falter
    And cry

    The seconds that were spent doing nothing at all, longing to fade away
    And cry

    You knew the minute it was over
    And the second he walked out the door
    That your tears had turned to dust
    Your heart to stone
    Your mind to ice
    And that your eyes had dried up
    Forever

    You would never have the privilege of being able to
    Relax
    Break down
    Let go
    Breathe in
    And cry

    You dream of crystal tears
    Flowing down rosy cheeks




    I was originally going to make this part one of two, but you tell me if I should make another.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    :eek: that's is amazing piece of work...i can never be so good...ever!!! ^_^ keep it up!
     
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    fallenangel

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    i felt that the style of this one was quite original.

    i liked it!

    it's good to see you back torn rose. can't wait to read more of your stuff! ;)
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Thanks again for posting here as well. ^_^ I'm just happy the evil one that posted on Shut Up and dissed everyone didn't reply here. To whoever replies next here, should I make a second part? I have some ideas, and it should be similar to this but diff. :blush:
    Ooh, did I go anywhere? I'm back. Only I never really left.
     
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    bleeding rose

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    heyaa i can see your still writing one after the other lol
    your never taking a break--well thats good for us (readin more of your lyrics ^_^ --
    this one was good -i get the title "cry" now lol
    -yeh make a second part...- it'll be great ...i think lol
    it will probably be better than great ^_^
    anyways i'll always be waiting for your next one :teehee:
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    GREAT, I havn't been posting for a while (been way to busy) and i can see you have really developed, this is amazing work. About the second part, well, do what you want, if you feel the second part in you go for it, but if you will have to force it and create something that may become a bit of a let down, then don't. Just keep writting, and keep posting. ;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good stuff there.
     
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    Linja

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    Thanks everyone that posted. I 'aven't been posting for a while either now, well, about a week, because I haven't had internet access and 'm not sure when i'll next get it, so, thanks for posting, and i hope i'll have my next poem up about now. ^_^ Keep it up you lot.
     
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