Carnival World In the Carnival built on false beams The sinister rule in unfailing power As the unknowing forfeit their dreams I will wait for judgments hour Death is drawn with fingers of bone Schemes are sketched with precision and wit While the Strings are pulled behind the unknown We buy their deceptions, noosed in debt Behind the mirrors and magic there is a fire Blind to the perpetual sickness of our soul The Illuminati entice our darkest nature And we become, forever fools ______________________________________ Hello, been sometime since I have posted anything here, been real busy with life, and well, I am also writting a rather lengthy story. In this story, yet to be named, there are several poems that crop up, this one is found carved in stone in the city of Timoria. This story takes place back in the time of Acient Greece, with myths and fables and huge battles. I hope you like the poem, please comment.
I might post it here, chapter by chapter, like one chapter a week, since right now its half-done and is already at 5,000 words. Man I have so many projects right now, "The Sword and the Soul," is a possible title, so is "The Devils Heart", and a modern day detective suspence thriller called "The Red Letter Saint", plus school and work, I really want to get back to writting poetry, but it might be awile, I see here alot of people have progressed, nice to see such great writting!
Nice to see you back here, and you sure like to enter with a *BANG*. Great poem, loved it, great job.
Thanks you guys, it's good to be back, maybe in a bit when I edit my story some more, I will post the first few chapters.