Recuses lyrics

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    Wiard

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    I've just joined a really cool band called Recuses and these are my first lyrics. Please tell me what you think.
    By the way, I'm Dutch so please tell me if my English is wrong somewhere.

    Fall Apart

    She was a little selfish
    I wanted her to leave
    She made me give up something
    Which she knew would not succeed
    I tried to talk her over
    She never seemed to care
    Why does she hate me now then
    I don’t know, it isn’t fair
    When we started talking
    It would end up in a fight
    Then I would scream for hours
    Cause I knew it wasn’t right
    You’ll fall apart

    I will break
    You in two
    You take me
    Away from hope

    Please god let me destroy her
    I can’t live with all her lies
    She has to leave right now
    I’ll kick her out before she dies
    She’s gonna taste my vengeance
    I’ll rip out her frozen heart
    You bitch, you scarred my soul
    Now you will fall apart

    I will break
    You in two
    You take me
    Away from hope

    What do I have to do
    Nothing seems to work
    I can’t keep myself
    From falling apart

    Without A Fight

    Fade away
    Take away
    Embracing light
    Without a fight

    Darkness is surrounding me
    Falling down this cannot be
    Follow me into the light
    Sacrifice your only life
    Darkness is surrounding me
    Blinds my soul I cannot see
    Please take me away from here
    Take me to the upper sphere

    Die for me
    Bleed for me
    You will see
    It’s meant to be

    You can’t run
    You can’t hide
    You will burn
    As a sacrifice

    Darkness is surrounding me
    Fills me up I cannot breathe
    Wanna step into the light
    But I can’t I’ll burn inside
    Darkness is surrounding me
    Take my sins and leave me be
    Can’t someone just hear me shout
    Come down here and take me out


    Separate My Mind

    I can’t take this pain
    It makes me drift away
    It’s not part of me, not the same
    As the blood that’s flowing through my veins
    And everything that I said
    Backed up by voices in my head
    I can’t take no more of this
    Looking at my bleeding fists
    You’re the one who showed me how
    To fight the voice I’m hearing now

    Go!
    Make these voices go away
    Please stop screaming I’m insane
    Fight the voices in my head
    They will stay until I’m dead
    Fight!
    I will take them to the light
    Try to make them go away
    But these voices always stay

    These ropes are way to tight
    Make me choke inside
    It’s not working, this is bad
    The way they try to clear my head
    Treatment has no use at all
    It only makes the voices call
    Doctors don’t know what they do
    So I just keep hearing you
    Saying that I’ll break one day
    But I won’t, so go away

    Go!
    Make these voices go away
    Please stop screaming I’m insane
    Fight the voices in my head
    They will stay until I’m dead
    Fight!
    I will take them to the light
    Try to make them go away
    But these voices always stay
     
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    saunderitos

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    (w00t)

    awesome,your english is good :D

    i like the first one best :D
     
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    Wiard

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    thanks man
    my dream is to be as good as you :innocent: :lol:
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks man
    my dream is to be as good as you :innocent: :lol: [/b][/quote]
    :lol: you being serious ?

    :bounce:
     
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    El Muerto

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    Not bad at all for your first lyrics. ;)


    I wish you the best of luck with your band. :D


    No one can be as good as you saunderitos :p
     
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    Wiard

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    :lol: you being serious ?

    :bounce:[/b][/quote]
    nah, but i think you're a very talented writer :)
     
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    saunderitos

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    :lol:

    thanks
     
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    Separate my mind, that one is really good.
     
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    Ether

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    4 words.....I'd buy your album!!!

    :D
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Except me :mellow:

    :wth:




    :whistle:





    :lol:




    Great work, simple but it flowed well and sounded good. Some forced rhyming in some bits, especially the second brought it down, but other than that it was pretty good.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Except me :mellow: [/b][/quote]
    :p
     
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    El Muerto

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    Except me :mellow: [/b][/quote]
    :p
     
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    Arhaz

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    i loved the second one, it sounded very very right and flowed like pure water...great job!
     
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    Does pure water flow diferently to normal water? :mellow:
     
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    Arhaz

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    Does pure water flow diferently to normal water? :mellow: [/b][/quote]
    normal water may have goop in it...and slime too that relatively reduces it's velocity as compared to pure water which contains no effluents and has water miolecules alone. compared to the density of the water molecules, the molecules of the effluents possess a greater magnitude of density and since acceleration is inversely proportional to mass, and weight is mass multiplied by gravitational pull, and weight is also directly proportional to density, it makes the "normal" water flow at a reduced speed due to lesser acceleration...:geek:



    yeh, normal water flows slower, dude!! :lol:
     
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    What i heard

     
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    Arhaz

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    :lol: ...ok...i sware not to stray away from the topic any more... :lol:
     
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    thanks for all the positive comments ^_^
     
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