I've just joined a really cool band called Recuses and these are my first lyrics. Please tell me what you think. By the way, I'm Dutch so please tell me if my English is wrong somewhere. Fall Apart She was a little selfish I wanted her to leave She made me give up something Which she knew would not succeed I tried to talk her over She never seemed to care Why does she hate me now then I don’t know, it isn’t fair When we started talking It would end up in a fight Then I would scream for hours Cause I knew it wasn’t right You’ll fall apart I will break You in two You take me Away from hope Please god let me destroy her I can’t live with all her lies She has to leave right now I’ll kick her out before she dies She’s gonna taste my vengeance I’ll rip out her frozen heart You bitch, you scarred my soul Now you will fall apart I will break You in two You take me Away from hope What do I have to do Nothing seems to work I can’t keep myself From falling apart Without A Fight Fade away Take away Embracing light Without a fight Darkness is surrounding me Falling down this cannot be Follow me into the light Sacrifice your only life Darkness is surrounding me Blinds my soul I cannot see Please take me away from here Take me to the upper sphere Die for me Bleed for me You will see It’s meant to be You can’t run You can’t hide You will burn As a sacrifice Darkness is surrounding me Fills me up I cannot breathe Wanna step into the light But I can’t I’ll burn inside Darkness is surrounding me Take my sins and leave me be Can’t someone just hear me shout Come down here and take me out Separate My Mind I can’t take this pain It makes me drift away It’s not part of me, not the same As the blood that’s flowing through my veins And everything that I said Backed up by voices in my head I can’t take no more of this Looking at my bleeding fists You’re the one who showed me how To fight the voice I’m hearing now Go! Make these voices go away Please stop screaming I’m insane Fight the voices in my head They will stay until I’m dead Fight! I will take them to the light Try to make them go away But these voices always stay These ropes are way to tight Make me choke inside It’s not working, this is bad The way they try to clear my head Treatment has no use at all It only makes the voices call Doctors don’t know what they do So I just keep hearing you Saying that I’ll break one day But I won’t, so go away Go! Make these voices go away Please stop screaming I’m insane Fight the voices in my head They will stay until I’m dead Fight! I will take them to the light Try to make them go away But these voices always stay
Not bad at all for your first lyrics. I wish you the best of luck with your band. No one can be as good as you saunderitos
Except me :wth: :whistle: Great work, simple but it flowed well and sounded good. Some forced rhyming in some bits, especially the second brought it down, but other than that it was pretty good.
Does pure water flow diferently to normal water? [/b][/quote] normal water may have goop in it...and slime too that relatively reduces it's velocity as compared to pure water which contains no effluents and has water miolecules alone. compared to the density of the water molecules, the molecules of the effluents possess a greater magnitude of density and since acceleration is inversely proportional to mass, and weight is mass multiplied by gravitational pull, and weight is also directly proportional to density, it makes the "normal" water flow at a reduced speed due to lesser acceleration... yeh, normal water flows slower, dude!!
We've recorded Without A Fight on friday. The quality is not very good and the song still needs some improvement, but I still wanted to post it You can download it here: http://s46.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=38T012B...GV1MTBLIMOKMHI6 Tell me what you think.