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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by .epitome.of.irony., Oct 20, 2005.

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    .epitome.of.irony.

    .epitome.of.irony. Member

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    insincere replies cut the shape you posess
    the realities that cut me add to my overall regress
    all of the stress build inside this troubled insensitive head
    i move back and forth as i lay on the floor beside of my bed
    trying to contain this feeling i feel lodged inside of my chest
    as i conform to your command as i salute and try my very best





    to take a bullet.








    and be your soldier.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I actually liked it, i found the ending a bit too abrupt, though this may have been intentional. It was really intense, i loved it.
     
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    Hurrikane Xero

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    I think that its cool.
     
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    .epitome.of.irony.

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    thanks guys!
     

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