Fluorescent Red Sky Lights

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    Will

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    Song notes: This is the final version of a song I've been posting here for the past couple of months. I should've waited to post the final version to begin with but my band kept tweaking the song so I kept tweaking the lyrics. These are the final lyrics. I've left out any formatting because you don't need to know who's singing what.

    Fluorescent Red Sky Lights

    Just beneath this fake fluorescent sky
    Bleeding a thousand tears of red light

    I walk alone along these streets
    Broken dreams take me back home
    I'll never be lost

    The stars are weeping tonight
    The stars are weeping tonight
    The streets are crying tonight
    Blood-lined cheeks, blood-soaked dreams
    The stars are sleeping tonight
    The stars are sleeping tonight
    The streets are dying tonight
    This red sky bleeding black

    Night turns to dusk in front of me
    The moon won't watch over me
    I'm betrayed tonight
    Red in my eyes burns so brightly
    The stars have not got my back
    I'll light my own path

    The stars are weeping tonight
    Just beneath this fake fluorescent sky
    The streets are crying tonight
    Blood-lined cheeks, blood-soaked dreams
    The stars are sleeping tonight
    Bleeding a thousand tears of red light
    The streets are dying tonight
    This red sky bleeding black

    Just beneath this fake fluorescent sky
    We dream of ways to bleed the night
    Bleeding a thousand tears of red light
    Ripping apart the tears we cry

    I'll ascend above your oceans
    And soar through your clouds as it rains
    As it rains
    I'll fly now on these broken wings
    Thieved from angels now slain and dead
    Slain and dead

    Dancing upon these memories
    I was here once but now I'm gone
    Now I'm gone
     
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    Amanda

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    I have to say that these lyrics came a long way. In the beginning I honestly thought that they were mediocre. But after seeing the finally product, I'm floored.

    Brilliant job.
     
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    i love this. its just simply beautiful will.
     
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    very interesting, it was very emotional--thumbs up! :lol:
     
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    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    inetersting. if it's a song, all the more better. very different and unique.
     
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    Linja

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    It's beautiful. It'll sound amazing as a song, this is a wonderful piece of work.
     
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    Pretty cool. Would probably seem better with music, but it still came across quite well. Congrads.
     
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    Thanks for the additional comments.

    The song's going to be recorded in the next couple weeks.
     
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    Wow i really enjoyed reading that, great job:thumbsup:.
     
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    Awesome man :)
     
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    Cool, I hope it can be posted up on the net for us all to hear
     
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    Thanks for the comments.

    We'll probably work on the song some next week but now I don't know. My vocalist's grandmother just died so he's not going to be free at all. It's going to be real rough.
     
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    Reminds me of that Story Of The Year song about setting the sky on fire or something.
     
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    Will

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    "Anthem of Our Dying Day"? :lol:

    The chorus has almost stayed the same the entire time we've had the song. I really have no inspiration for the song itself. I just kind of wrote it. I tried writing it about things but it never really worked out. Plus every band's got to have a song that makes no fucking sense whatsoever. :lol:
     

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