Just soemthing else I've been working on. This is very different from my usual work.This is very simple, but the waht I was trying to do is make it cacthy and rythmatic I'm just trying different things out. So please let me know what you think. What're you talking about I can't make it out You just want to shout But there's a voice in your head It's hearing all you said And it's getting very big Looking at what you did I can't hear you from beginning to end Yeah! I can't hear you what you're saying Why You shouting? I thought you were playing It keeps getting louder Your voice it keeps on raising What're you getting at Do I need a tic-tac I can't hear your crap Minds going kind of crazy You can't keep it steady And it's getting kind of heavy I'm ready to hear you But you got some issues Your face is turning blue Must get a clue I can't hear you I'm feeling like a fool AGAIN!! Your face is turning blue Must get a clue I can't hear you I'm feeling like a fool Noo Yea!!! I can't hear you what you're saying Why're you shouting I thought you were playing It keeps getting louder Your voice it keeps on raising I can't hear you what you're saying Why're you shouting I thought you were playing It keeps getting louder Your voice it keeps on raising
Yeh man! That is schhweeet. You have gotten alot better since I last read your stuff. A big PHAT kudos for you.
it's pretty okay. i like your stuff when they flip a bit to the sentimental side. this is good enough though.