Russian roulette

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Russian roulette:

    Pick a number between one and ten
    I love this game we're playing again
    Got my gun loaded, ready to go
    Just pull the trigger don't care if friend or foe

    Russian roulette, sweat shining on you face
    Russian roulette, time to blow out your brains

    Spin the cylinder a few times for thrills
    Don't think about who's blood is spilled
    Pulling the trigger one time after another
    Game over when the wall has a deep red cover

    Russian roulette, sweat shining on you face
    Russian roulette, time to blow out your brains

    Russian roulette, hide your face
    Russian roulette, blow out your brains
    Russian roulette, walls are stained
    Russian roulette, I love this game

    I think this one sucks...but it was fun writing it...:shifty:
     
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    esaul17

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    It isn't too bad. Better than the exclamation mark poem for sure. I can't really relate to it, but it has a nice ring to it.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank U...I hope my writing's improving...just a quick question for you...how long have you been writing lyrics and stuff? You don't have to answer but I mean...you're just so good at writing...:)
     
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    esaul17

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    I wrote really crappy stuff I showed no one starting summer 2003. I did those for a year on and off then ditched the whole writing thing for a while. Then, in october of 2005 I began writing again. My first two were quite bad, but after them I started to improve. Been writing a few poems a month from then to now.
     
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    I like it. It sounds like a carnival ride to me. Like a fun poem/song about death.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    lol...carneval song....thx ^_^ ...

    ehm...@esaul17 really???
     
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    esaul17

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    Yep.
     
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    I don't think it sucks actually. I like it but it's not really a poem it's more like a song to me..
     
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    Seinfeld

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    :p it is a song...;)
     
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    Mk_Spike

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    i can never really write my emotions out in a poem/song my emotions are just so unexplanetory and hard to let out through music you know?But yea well done to you people who can and great poem
     
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    Seinfeld

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    It's really not getting out my emotions for me...it's more like directing a thought at a person I dislike or like...most of the time at least...
     
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    Mk_Spike

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    If i directed thought to those i dislike i'd be in serious trouble and for those i like...welll hehehehe i dont think theyd appreciate it :p
     
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    Seinfeld

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    hmmm....good point...I don't think it's smart to say bad things about the president...oh woops...I didn't even ask if he's someone you dislike...how stupid :p
     
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    Mk_Spike

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    rotflmao hahaha good one nah but the people who do that usually release albums with r18+ ratings. That is not what i want my band to release :p
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Edit:

    Fuck...what was I on when I started posting shit here?...I feel like such a dick.
     
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