Be there (4 me): If I let you right in Under my breaking skin Would you still stay right here? Wiping away my tears? Sowing my bleeding wounds? Waiting for an 'I love you'? ...that will never be said... Help me stand on my feet I will never release You're in way to deep If I showed you my heart That's been torn right apart Would you still be right there? Holding on to thin air? Keeping what was a lie? Waiting for the feelings to die? ...that will never exist... Help me stand on my feet I will never release You're in way to deep And if I told you to stay So I could push you away Would you fall back in line? Stand tall with your broken spine? So I could hurt you some more? Just to heal my bruising sores? ...that will never go away... Help me stand on my feet I will never release You're in way to deep Hope y'all like it...just improvised on this one...
Nice and new concept. Kind of a brutal depiction of abusing one's love, but it holds some originalty. I liked it. the only thing I didn't like was the opening, you seemed to drop the metaphor too quickly after it was made. But that might just be me.
AWESOME DUDE !!! ..*claps so hard that his hands pain* ..umm, after reading the opening i gotta feeling that u wer hurried into it, an intro wud be perfect. Nonetheless its still very good.