Chaos theory (please comment)

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Chaos theory: (working title)

    An exterior of flesh holds a beast inside
    Tortured child, beneath pain filled cries
    Growing louder than it's ever been before
    Driving deeper, yet it still wants more

    Cast aside all you've ever known
    It's not quite what your eyes have shown
    Think you're strong, yet you're left unborn
    Thriving within the womb of a whore

    Graceful butterfly has torn your world apart
    I hold your hand, break your still beating heart

    Unwillingly portrayed, daylight burns it's eyes
    Ears sown shut, it chokes on lies
    Given no chances, struggling to stay above
    Hideous but fragile, must it beg for love

    Graceful butterfly has torn your world apart
    I hold your hand, break your still beating heart

    Graceful butterfly has torn your world apart
    I hold your hand, break your still bleeding heart​
     
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    Agent

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    That's brilliant! Very strong lyrics!
     
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    That is fucking awesome Chris. Certainly your best work. Keep it up man. :)
     
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    Amazing
     
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    Excellent!! :). It reminds me of Nightwish's lyrics.
     
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    Yeah very strong lyrics. Good job man.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you all very much.
     
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    esaul17

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    Sorry for the late reply, but I liked it! Cool idea using the Butterfly Effect and Chaos Theory :).

    "Graceful butterfly has torn your world apart
    I hold your hand, break your still beating heart"

    That was my favourite part.

    Also, I hardly ever see you on MSN anymore, what gives?
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you.

    I'm never on msn cuz I'm in the states right now. Even if I weren't, my computer's down right now, so I have to get on my mom's PC and she doesn't have msn messenger on there. I'll be back on msn when I get back to germany though. (Computer'll be fixed by then)
     
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    esaul17

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    Your Mom's computer might at least have Windows Messenger if it is running Windows XP lol. Anyway, have fun in the states :).
     
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    Great lyrics,Nobody!!!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thanks, I will have fun ^_^

    (She deleted it off there and can't get it back on there...for some reason the msn messenger won't download either...weirdness :lol:)

    And: thank you, Penelope.
     

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