Please comment ---------------------------------------------------------- Scapegoat: She'll take another brutal beating and run to daddy telling him: "I love you more than anyone else", as she swallows the lies she tells herself Must be great to have complete control (Killing your creation) Raping body, mind and soul Hiding bruises underneath a trench coat (Crying all night) She's daddy's little scapegoat He'll force another bottle down hoping to phase those memories out He'll tell himself "It's okay, it's not my fault it has to be this way" Must be terrifying to always lose control (Burnmarks by your creator) Raping body, mind and soul Hoping those bruises would never show (He's raging inside) You too, were daddy's little scapegoat
Horrifying and sickening message given in mind-shaking way. I swear I'm feeling pressure on the left side of my chest after reading this.
Good piece! I found it to be about a father who beat his son when drunk to let out stress caused by other things, and the son growing up and beating his daughter for the same reason... Was I right?
wow. scary. but people do go through this shit. and you evoked the emotion in a very sensitive manner. a brilliant piece.