Please tell me what you think EDIT: changed the title! -------------------------------------------------------------- When friends are lost: The city lights burn, you swallow them whole The only thing keeping us warm at night The ash and the ember bled from the sky, driving us home On our own / all alone We keep falling, falling Faster,faster We keep falling, falling in your eyes We keep falling, falling Faster, faster We keep falling, falling out of sight The sky has stopped bleeding, the city is burnt These scars and the memories are all we have left The sirens are screaming they're taking you in and I walk home On my own / all alone We keep falling, falling Faster,faster We keep falling, falling in your eyes We keep falling, falling Faster, faster We keep falling, falling out of sight Our world's descending faster every day Our world is falling, falling, falling away Our world's descending faster every day Our world is falling, falling, falling away
It's pretty good, I'd really like to hear those lyrics in a song. The only thing I don't like is the title.
Good work! i agree with Dusan it would be sweet as a song but it just needs a new title! Keep up the good work though!