Well I’m back again for a-nother verse This’ll sure give you a-nother curse Hearin my rhymes they will make yo head spin They’re like a fist that keeps hittin yo chin All night-long I be hearin you whine That hearing my rap should be a crime Cause I break your head and leave you violated U be like “wow” especially constipated I’m sick of this, I’m sick of you This is not over for you to screw So keep your words in your mouth Before I smack you up all in the dirty south The sun sets, and the darkness comes out Not only in the sky but also in me, Bust out! Here comes the darkness The illness even my skillness Where is the competition? no intuition Rapping better than me, boy that never was yo mission Although there is a conception A plan!….That ill win and leave u in yo session There is only one condition All rusted up and no commission Get on the corner, try rappin there People be walkin by, they don’t even care Yo momma can’t even stare She always told you to share, “boy don’t you dare” My rhymes are like a conspiracy They hit you up like a dose of ecstasy You’re an embarrassment to the human race You gonna get choked with my shoelace Oh good grace! Even the army is tellin you stop The army base and so is the navy base arguin nonstop My music is sometimes Techno But listenin to your pop, Oh hell no! Forget that I aint that idiotic This is it, its totally psychotic Its Aquatic its gonna be wet After this beat’s over your gonna be in debt Oh no sweat its just a threat You’re better off smokin a marijuana cigarette Check this, Mic check 1, 2, 3 You gonna get strangled, they call you the dead emcee Ya buried already, from you daddy’s HIV You damn well be, Just go back to the Mediterranean Sea This is so not angelic, it’s more devil like You never stood a chance at the sympathetic strike You are so pathetic, you thought you could be more poetic This is genetic research, it’s so magnetic, so energetic So you put your money where your mouth is Cause rappin like this you wont even make it in the biz You wont even come close This is over, its done, adios!
wow that was good...bit like my style in way when i read it lol but mine is straight up disses with clever words
thanks chali, thats cool that you liked it im glad, i might have some time to do another one in a couple of days
nice rap.. not an expert on it though.. but yeah.. i liked those lines.. probably cos they made me laugh.. [i dnt think im sane right now.. its so late.. ] good work though..!