Please read and respond to 'Come Back To Me', I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks in advance. .:Come Back To Me:. Another sleepless night Without you here The night's in full bloom And the clock flashes one But wide awake I'm tossing over in bed Tugging at my covers Restless here tonight And it's all the same hue Throughout my eyes Remember when we held hands Down by the shimmering pond? Remember when i held you close Under the weeping willows? I miss those times I miss your shoulder here Please come back Come back to me The static from the sky Frequently lighting my room To reveal my eyes wide And the clock flashes three I'm more alert than before And still can't sleep My covers in heaps Scattered across the floor And it's the same numbing All over my body Remember when we first kissed Out for all to see? Remember when we first spoke The glisten in both our eyes? I miss those times I miss your warmth here Please come back Come back to me Remember when we held hands Out for all to see? Remember when we first spoke Under the weeping willows? I miss those times I miss your warm shoulder here Please come back Come back to me Hand in hand off into the daylight...
You're a talented writer, Tim. There is a lot of talented writers on here. You and everyone else should be proud of yourselves. Great job!
Aww, thank you so much. That means alot to me. And thank you as well, crazy dips, especially for using your first post to respond to my work. Thank You.