hey derek... i never had the chance to read this poem, but... it blew me away. it's amazing how you find such powerful describing words. i know the story behind bri (i guess it's her) and it's such a shame that she is a female dog like this... i feel sorry for you, because i was kind of a friend for you at this time then... best wishes for your future, and with such a honestly and warm heart, you will get what you deserve... true love... believe me!
Not her...not anymore at least...too many 'eh..' feelings. Danielle though..thats a different story.. [/b][/quote] oOoOoh.. so its about someone else.. OOoOoh okay then.. but nevertheless what you wrote was heartfelt.. really good, and all the positive comments coming from everyone is very true.. and i agree with it all.. your poem is brilliant! .. u have talent dude.. [best wishes with Danielle then..^_~]
Wow, what a great poem! You have incredible writing abilities; you're able to convey your ideas so clearly and in a way that everyone can relate to them. You have loads of talent, keep it up, I love reading your stuff.
Thats good too, because I might be in a band soon so if I'm going to write lyrics, I want to make ones people can relate to and use to help get through things in thier life. If I help one person make it easier through the day, then I know I've done my job.