Him is adictive. i have been listening for about a week and find myself randomly going back for more. am i not alone here?
100% awesome. great discriptiveness!
honestly, i like the story. :lol: but i think it could be smoother. flow more. some of the endings of paragraphs seem to be forced. :wth: but...
thanks. this one is a recent poem i've done. i;m getting back into it. i used to write all the time but i kind of stopped. the others i've had on...
in this life of love and pain i find a place of essence and in this essence that must never wain i find some common sence this common sence is...
it difinatly says something. but the ryhming was lost in the begining. and it felt awkward. but i like what it said.
is that good or bad?
impressive. really. and thanks for the nice comment on my "insane is life" poem. i look forward to seeing more from you. :D
i hear it in some the voice of the music someone calling but no one i turn down the volume to listen defening silence i turn up the volume to...
nice. i like how you leace it hanging at the end of the chorus with "i want to..."
sane is normal, insane is life. unfortunatly sane and caught with the knife. mental health, with physical pain. a hope for adventure to come with...
i saw flight of the phoenix. good but they did alot of sitting around and crying or mopeing or something unproductive like that. then they started...
haul ass no chance i won't turn back do 80 nice and steady my road ahead a strait line not a turn not a bend my imortal life the doom of my sin...
i wonder why talks about peace yet give none. i hear voices from the deepest part of my soul i see the prince of lies himself in my eyes i want to...
insanitary thoughts colide. what more can i keep away? from the world that shut me out. in a life that passed me by. save me from this race that...
incredible. tells a great stoty without giving to much away. you can relate many things in your life to it. great outlet.
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