work on the lines and reword a few and restructure this it could be turned into a song easily
firsat is japanese second is korean im guessing
ill critique what you have here when i get the chance interesting revision
give my song i posted a look and tell me what you think
My cold bathroom tiles. first off im not really liking the title. it gives the impression the song hold no good topic to it. title...
sorry about that i meant to throw that in the thread with the lyrics my bad
so what all do you guys think?
chorus frustration directed at the weak at heart/ motivated by the darkness that surrounds them/ we've all played in this sinister part/ the...
not really a fan on angel hair i personally like chicken alfredo layered with pasta dish it is basicly where you boil chicken up then after its...
lol im still trying to learn how to speak it faster but i can mainly write it so so why
the rhyming is off a little bit but oh well im going to rewrite this and put audio to it some day
this isnt the biggest or most diversed forum i belong to but its starting to get pretty entertaining though
real magazine because i can learn something new why waste your mind with useless information when you could learn something playboy or penthouse
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sunshine genital herpes or aids you arent getting rid of either on
verse 1 stuck in an hour glass with frozen sands old memories slowly killing me with each passing day drugs have have got a strong hold of...
i went and seen it and i loved it and the wooden wheel scene kida got me dizzy from how they sorta rolled the camera lol
for me i liked the mind fucks as you put it and also the clever way the people got tortured
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it saddens me to be able to say im pisssed with my government im an american and i am disapointed with the government i agree you need a system to...
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