80 Words (Just Before) - Poem/Lyrics

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    RyRy

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    Here's a poem that I wrote a while ago. Comments are much appreciated :)

    80 Words (Just Before)
    Before our lies become our lives
    Before our death fulfilled with knives
    Before our greed is what we need
    It's when our souls are sold indeed

    Before this fighting ain't so small
    Before the warning ain't a call
    Before this victim ain't so fair
    It's when the pain, it turns to scare

    But when the truth is in our eyes
    When our arms are set aside
    It's when we see the other side
    To take on wars against our minds
     
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    Filip

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    I like it. :) Especially the first line.
     
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    Melis

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    Pretty good.
     
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    Reminds me of HHH
     

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