A rose of pain

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    bleeding rose

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    When I’m with you,
    You’re all sweet and adorable,
    When you’re with your pals,
    I barely exist,

    (Chorus)
    You think I’m dirt?
    I think your shit,
    You think I’m yours?
    Well I despise you,
    You miss me?
    I want to kill you,
    You say you love me?
    Well screw you its too late,

    I saw you with her,
    I found out that maybe,
    I wasn’t that special to you,
    As you made me feel alone,
    When it was just you and me,

    It killed me to see you with her,
    I feel like I regret in a way,
    But then again,
    I think that its already over,
    As im gone up high there where I watch you,

    (Chorus)
    You think I’m dirt?
    I think your shit,
    You think I’m yours?
    Well I despise you,
    You miss me?
    I want to kill you,
    You say you love me?
    Well screw you its too late,

    I was so happy,
    When I saw you throw that rose at me,
    And when you always come at my grave to pray,
    I see that I wasn’t just a fling,
    You really did love me,
    I regret I hope you do to for treating me that way

    R&R
    Bleeding Rose
     
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    Linja

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    This is brilliant.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Nice. we've had a lot of tragic poems lately involving suicide and death. and this one defenetly lives up to some of the other great poems that are floating around. much better than your short ones. keep it up.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Really dark and emotional poem. Good job.
     
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    yeah, i liked this also. i could definetly see it being a good rock song! ^_^
     
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    Razan

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    My second favorite! (w00t) (Yes, my favorite will always be Suicide so don't even ask.)
    This one's amazing, I love it!
     
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    Tom

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    (w00t) wow nice poem . very pasionate and dark .nice work keep on going. :D
     
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    Glue

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    good job... :lol:
     
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    bleeding rose

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    thx u guys ^_^
     
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    Tom

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    keep up the gd work . hop eu post more dramatic poems for us ppl to read . ^_^
     
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    bleeding rose

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    Haha will do so :p
     
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    Tom

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    gdgd :D do u have like a lil preview of ur next masterpice :p like a verse or sumit
     
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    bleeding rose

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    yeh pm me if u want...but i already did a new poem/song check it out :)
     
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    Tom

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    1: pm? how i do that im a lil new
    2:were is ur new poem,im a lil dence ^_^
     

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