Anthem of Revolution

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    a life in ashes

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    Anthem of Revolution

    Break the bonds and make your call,
    Scream my name see the heavens fall,
    Stand before the dawn of time,
    Tear the edges, fray the line,

    Let go of everything,
    Let go of what you know,

    Rise, and break free,
    Rise, and cut the ropes that bind you,
    Rise, before you choke upon their lies,

    Define the hate within the war,
    Cry these tears and beg for more,
    That's what they want they want you dead,
    Fear the mists and tides of crimson regret,

    Let go of the rope,
    Let go and slip noose,

    Rise, and break free,
    Rise, and cut the ropes that bind you,
    Rise, before you choke upon their lies,

    We're choking and dying now,
    Can anyone save us...no.


    thoughts please....
     
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    saunderitos

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    :D nice

    sounds political,i like it :D
     
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    ShatterGlass

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    LOVING IT!!!!!! :chemist:
     
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    LProx4life

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    I Like It :D
     
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    a life in ashes

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    thanks...
     
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    Linja

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    I like. Keep it up.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Totally Awsome.........
    Flowed so well and had such great depth to it, awsome write.
     
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    Luke

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    8/10,good but more work needs to be done. :)
     
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    heshboy

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    8.4/10 It was good. I really enjoyed the beginning and other parts. Now please Review my topic too. :lol:
     
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    GrafiTTied

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    mega cool i wish words could come to me like that................to bad im ********. :(
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's very...very...........GREAT!...nice amazing job...
    this poem took me to a world draped in soldiers uniforms drenched with blood...
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Me like :)
     

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