Writing: Blizzard of Yesterday

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    Erica

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    Here I lay in the snow
    Bloodied and beaten
    But my shackles gone
    Gone with the wind
    The snow blindness of yesterday
    Has left me to ponder
    Ponder the blue skies
    Blue skies once painted grey
    Judge me no more
    Oh Great Accuser
    For the storm has passed
    And I here am I
    Beaten but victorious
    Wipe away the blood and the dirt
    I will walk into the enteral forest
    To search for truths long hidden
     
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    Filip

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    Beaten but victorious
    Wipe away the blood and the dirt

    Love these two lines.
     
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    lime treacle

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    I love the imagery you put in your poems.
     
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    Erica

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    Woah 2 responses :lol:

    Thanks guys! :p
     

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