collection of songs (please read)

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    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

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    So, it's been a long time since I've posted any of my writing
    && I'm sure a lot of you have no clue who I even am either.

    But yeah...
    I have a few songs, I want to post up to see what people think of them,
    so please, please... give me some feedback, good or bad.



    'it's rude for the dying to laugh'

    footsteps can be heard from across the courtyard
    with every step taken, another life is lost
    but sympathy is something i know nothing about
    so you can fall from the highest mountain top
    i won't be around any time soon to hear you hit the ground

    there are seven ways to die, so hold on tight
    lets take this car and find the shore line

    tie this cinder block to your feet and dive right in
    pray to god that you don't make it out of this alive
    you'll find that gasping for air is the last thing you want
    soon the sea floor will be the only place you can call home

    there are seven ways to die, so hold on tight
    lets take this car and find the shore line

    you can't hear heartbeats underwater
    but at least the waves sound the same

    but at least the waves sound the same

    there are seven ways to die, so hold on tight
    lets take this car and find the shore line

    'i entrust my dream to a shooting star'

    with every word i've said and with all these thoughts in my head
    yeah, i know, i know, it's all just a constant reminder of you
    but you know, you know, nothing will ever come easy
    so c'mon, darling, be strong for me and i'll be strong for you

    you're falling from the sky, but don't worry
    i'll be the concrete just to catch your fall

    the ocean stretches so far, but i'll be your lighthouse,
    so you'll see me and i'll see you, where ever you decide to go
    even if the wind knocks us over, will regain our balance
    so c'mon, darling, breath for me and i'll breath for you

    you're falling from the sky, but don't worry
    i'll be the concrete just to catch your fall

    i said, "girl, you're the dreams people won't re-call when they wake,
    but through the day they wish they could remember it"
    she said, "boy, you're a perfect moment that is so cliche,
    but through the day everyone is repeating it"

    you're falling from the sky, but don't worry
    i'll be the concrete just to catch your fall

    'when did karma become the new trend'

    even stars break under the most sever circumstances
    constellations are torn from the sky, but not one question asked
    and i wish i could have whispered these words into your ear
    while your fingers were wrapped around my neck
    but not even i can re-write history,
    you'll be the only one written in the stars from now on

    paper mache hearts break, crack, and fall to the ground
    no matter how perfect they seemed, nothing is better then the real thing

    words can never be forgotten, to bad i never got them out,
    echos escape the walls, screaming the secrets i never told
    so please let warwoves tear me apart until nothings left
    have my blood spill, engrave there teeth marks into my skin
    and soon enough it will become clear
    the next chapter has nothing to say

    paper mache hearts break, crack, and fall to the ground
    no matter how perfect they seemed, nothing is better then the real thing

    this is just a plain and simple goodbye
    and i can no longer save my breath
    this is just a plain and simple goodbye
    and i can no longer save my breath
    this is just a plain and simple goodbye
    and i can no longer save my breath

    paper mache hearts break, crack, and fall to the ground
    no matter how perfect they seemed, nothing is better then the real thing
    paper mache hearts break, crack, and fall to the ground

    'heartbeats felt in stomachs'

    the febuary sun burns so bright
    tonight romance will flow through my veins
    i'll light the candles and stare into your eyes
    let our hearts, let our hearts entwine

    i'm a car wreck and you're an angel sent from above
    you fell from the sky and onto my windows ledge

    i'll drain my blood and empty it in this pen
    i'll write your name across the moon
    i hope you see it, i hope you see it tonight
    you are what i've been longing for

    i'm a car wreck and you're an angel sent from above
    you fell from the sky and onto my windows ledge

    i'll write this note and send it across the ocean surface
    the current of the waves will make sure it finds it's way to you

    'every constellation needs a star'

    we stare at ourselves in puddles on street corners
    all the peddales are falling, love me, love you not

    i made a promise i couldn't keep
    and i hope to god you don't forgive me

    a ending without a start, a eulogy without a death,
    maybe this went by to quick
    this towns a heartattack and your first on my list

    i made a promise i couldn't keep
    and i hope to god you don't forgive me

    all the writing on the walls tell the secreats no one tell
    i said if there a will, theres a way baby, i lied

    all the writing on the walls tell the secrets

    i made a promise i couldn't keep
    and i hope to god you don't forgive me

    i made a promise i couldn't keep
    and i hope to god you don't forgive me
    i made a promise i couldn't keep
    and i hope to god you don't forgive me

    'my dear, lets tie up loose ends'

    your letters fall through the cracks in the floor
    bones break and shatter with questions no more
    agony overtakes the world with no remourse
    triping over phone cords, smashing teeth against concrete
    blood has a way with causing headaches

    your face has a way with mixing my thoughts
    grab my hand and tell me your favorite story
    i still remember, i still remember

    bodies made of cancer, hands full of splinters
    this voice plays in my head over and over
    ripping hair from the scalp, i can't make myself forget
    reading brail as if i was blind, words written on the floor,
    i can't make myself, i can't make myself

    your face has a way with mixing my thoughts
    grab my hand and tell me your favorite story
    i still remember, i still remember

    tear apart the sky, tear apart the sky
    she was taken, she was taken
    oh dear god, oh dear god
    give her back, please give her back

    your face has a way with mixing my thoughts
    grab my hand and tell me your favorite story
    i still remember, i still remember
    your face has a way with mixing my thoughts
    grab my hand and tell me your favorite story
    i still remember, i still remember

    'sink this ship and fill the halls with water'

    plains fall from the sky and burn wholes in the ground, like shooting stars
    we walk along sidealks, dodging cracks in the pavement

    ladies and gentalmen, this is your captain speaking
    gather your belongings, it's time to abadon ship

    sound the alarm, sound the alarm
    close your eyes, close your eyes
    take a deep breath, sink or swim

    cars collide with street signs, it looks like someons not going home tonight
    the skidmarks in the snow will tell us everything we need to know

    ladies and gentalmen, this is your captain speaking
    gather your belongings, it's time to abadon ship

    sound the alarm, sound the alarm
    close your eyes, close your eyes
    take a deep breath, sink or swim
     
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    pushedaway

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    They're awesome!
    Really love every song..
    I've noticed one thing and that is your lyrical theme sounds much like that of Evanescence, and I'm a huge fan of Evanescence, Especially for their way of writting songs.. So it's a thumbs up from me :)
     
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    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

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    Thank you very much.

    && Evanescence? Really?
    How odd, I don't listen to them... like at all.
    xD

    But again, thank you.
    Anybody else want to give me some feedback?
    :)
     
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    Roubin

    Roubin Well-Known Member

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    Each one of them is wonderful! And yeah, your writing is similar to Amy Lee´s writing, but I´m a fan of Evanescence, so I love your writing.
     
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    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

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    Haha, well thank you very much
    && I guess I may have to give Evanescence a little listen.
    ;D
     
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    Seinfeld

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    "When did karma become the new trend" is my favorite.

    It's really clever IMO. I like it a lot...hooked me right there with the very first few words :thumbsup:
     
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    Tony

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    Thanks a lot, that is one of my personal favorites,
    my old band and I made a song for it, it was so fun to play,
    lots of pig squeals and all that cool stuff.
    xD
     

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