Writing: Cosmic Ripple

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    Erica

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    So this is rewrite of poem that I love. It's a sort of recollection of... We'll call it a day dream lol.

    As I lay in the ethereal pool of infinite
    The song of a siren echoing deep
    In the far reaches of mind
    I float in utter tranquility

    The stars dripped from the sky
    Falling like rain on the sea of lost souls
    Cosmic ripples passed through me
    Echoing through the eternity
    Each wave a different color
    Warming the core of my very soul

    Shorelines adorned with glowing mushrooms
    Prying eyes of red spy upon me
    Luminescent black butterflies fly overhead
    I land ashore on coarse sand
    The world yesterday melts away

    illuminated by purple mountains
    Sparse desert is all that remains
    The moon blackens
    Pale gypsies danced around me
    Their songs growing louder
    The bonfire before me flourishing

    A wall of sound droned on and drowned out
    The wail of the gypsies seemed to evanesce
    As all grew black and father time closed his eyes
    The petals of a lotus emerged and engulfed me
    As I lay my head for slumber
     
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    I don't get it :lol:
     
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    Umm, open image in new tab. Seems like it can't be embedded.
     
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    Oh lmao I didn't say I was tripping when I wrote this! Who told that? I bet it was that fucking purple gorilla over there. Fuck that guy...
     
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    Hahaha! :lol:
     

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