Deny

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by erasethepain, Mar 8, 2003.

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    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

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    This song pretty much explains itself. This is meant to be a hard song but mellow. It's kinda short, though.

    Everything I do, seems to bother you,
    If I'm not what you want me to be,
    Then why don't you just kill me?
    You just assume,
    That whatever I say, isn't good enough for you,
    We might as well not even speak,
    Your always worried about what other people think,
    You've made me lose all of my desire,
    Because all I am to you is just a failure

    I hate the way you whisper my name,
    If your so ashamed, then why dont you tell me how I can change?
    I just want you to accept me

    I can barely think and my bodies numb,
    Still trying to get my point across, Look at what we've become,
    We act like children, I just want you to know where I'm comin from,
    I want you to listen,
    Instead of seeing me as a discrace,
    Because no matter what I do, I cant change my face,
    You make me feel like ####,
    Listen to me, look into my eyes,
    You've taken away all of my pride,
    Every word is still stuck in my head,
    Dwelling over the words I should have said

    I hate the way you whisper my name,
    If your so ashamed, then why dont you tell me how I can change?
    I just want you to accept me

    Don't deny it, don't deny it, don't ######' deny it....

    I've lost all confidence in myself,
    I'm giving in to the pressure to try and be someone else...
     
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    Oblivion

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    Thats great, well done.
     
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    arT saveS

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    It's not bad, but why all the cussing? I mean we all cuss, but why put it in the music? It doesn't help any, it wastes room...I like it, but when your writing a song cussing shouldn't come too, just feelings.
     
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    erasethepain

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    Why shouldnt I not be able to cuss? Its what I feel.
     
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    Oblivion

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    He could go all Limp Bizkit like and say 48 ####'s in one song.......
     

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