I wrote this on April 13 of last year. It's one of my first poems. I found some other old ones but they reallly suck butt so they're staying off the boards. What do you think of this one? Desperate Desperately looking for an escape looking for a way to get out of your games To get out of your face Needing to get out and let go of my doubt Screaming inside, Let me out let me out. Let me leave and be done with this horrible game. I'm dying inside Letting go Giving up I'm gone.
yeah, i agree on that! you obviously made a pretty good start to writting cause this being one of your first poems, it pretty damm rocks! no wonder your a good writer now! can't wait to see some new stuff!