Dirty Secrets

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    Dedicated

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    "Dirty Secrets"

    When you WALK,
    Down the ROAD,
    Your hips wave side to side,
    And I KNOW,
    That I'm NOT,
    The smoothest of guys,
    And I KNOW,
    How you FEEL,
    Deep down inside.
    But I don't know why this is how I feel.

    On the back of this card,
    That I wrote to your friend,
    About all my dirty secrets,
    I'll explain exactly how I feel.

    My HAIR,
    Is a MESS,
    I'm not dressed to impress,
    But you LOOK,
    So damn FINE,
    It's hard to digest,
    With your HEELS,
    And your SKIRT,
    Your make-up seems to flirt.
    But I don't know why this is how I feel.

    On the back of this card,
    That I wrote to your friend,
    About all my dirty secrets,
    I'll explain exactly how I feel.

    Now you know what I want,
    Or more like how I feel,
    About you and your smile,
    I'll bet you didn't expect that.

    On the back of this card,
    That I wrote to your friend,
    About all my dirty secrets,
    I'll explain exactly how I feel.

    Now you know what I want,
    Or more like how I feel,
    About you and your smile,
    I'll bet you didn't expect that.
     
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    fallenangel

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    hey this was pretty good! not else much to say ... ;)
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    wow, sometimes its really hard to express ourselves and say exactly what we wanna say, but you just made me forget that with this amazing piece of work!! love it! ^_^
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks alot for the comments :)
     
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    Luke

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    Pretty good man,well done :)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Well done.
     
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    Thanks for the comments! :D
     
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    Awesome job, your writing is always the best.

    <3 Elaine
     
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    bleeding rose

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    different...but good :D
     

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