Empty Soul

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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    bleeding rose, Apr 21, 2005



    She looked inside of her
    Into the darkness of her shadow
    She found a soul

    But it did not belong to her
    At least she thought so
    She felt like a stranger to herself

    Then she thought
    I shall not...

    I shall not look deeply into my soul
    Even though I am a stranger to myself
    I must not think about it

    And she left her mind, moving on
    Slowly towards the light
    Shining above her
    Till her heartbeat stopped.



    R&R
     
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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    bleeding rose, Apr 21, 2005



    I hope you guys like this ... since it IS my first post ... lol.
    And btw, r&r torn rose's work as well, she's my best friend ^_^
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Linja, Apr 21, 2005



    Hey! This is tight. Really good, keep it up best friend o' mine. :D
     
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    fallenangel

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    fallenangel, Apr 21, 2005



    yeah, i like this but i think the flow of it needs some work. apart from that, it's good.
     

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