Failure

I will be your failure
I will be the one to send you to self destruction
you will fall; by my hand
Yet I love you still...

We must separate for your own good
If you stay my personal hell will swallow you
you will fall; by my hand
Yet you love me still...​

Still a work in progress. Not sure where to take it from here. Or if I should leave it where it's at...ideas?

 

well written...I enjoyed it! You could leave it like that or add more either way I think it's good.

 

Thank you. I think I'm going to keep it this way. I think it works better short.