Flame?

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    Harlz

    Harlz More Scared Of You Than You Are Of Me LPA Super Member

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    Just something that kinda came while listening to the new Slash album... Kinda works in the context of that kinda grungey style... Idk.

    Let me know for sure,
    That water can’t douse you at all
    Let me see for real,
    The fire only you can feel
    You’ve got a light, inside
    That nothing i know can obscure

    I wanna know your fire
    You know that you could sear my skin
    3rd degree is what im after
    Wanna see you leave your mark, yeaaaah

    Time that you could burn brighter,
    Put away the dark of those days
    You know what they wanna make you,
    But good luck to them with moulding flame
    i wonder do you blaze underwater?
    One day it’ll be put to the test

    I wanna know your fire
    You know that you could sear my skin
    Leave a mark for ever after
    Never will forget the heaaat, yeaaah

    *insert unwritten bridge here*
     
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    Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I like it, but I would take the "yeaaaahs" out. :lol:

    *The heat of heart like the Sun
    Let me know that you're the one
    I wanna feel that spreading flame
    Just tell me that you feel the same..


    :lol:
     
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    Harlz

    Harlz More Scared Of You Than You Are Of Me LPA Super Member

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    lol yeah the yea's were more for me personally to remind me what kinda style I was thinking of it being sung in haha.
     

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