I'm joining a band, and they want me to send them some song ideas, so I'm sending him these lyrics, and some guitar tracks that I need to record. We stand together, yet alone Against this force of the unknown To divide and fall apart Is to give in to the fall Defeat Adversary Requiem For the dream We stand Not a chance But a trial By the axe The blade will fall through the neck Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh Requiem For the dream You do not accept defeat From this vile enemy To hang your life up high To let your death be finalized Defeat Adversary Requiem For the dream We stand Not a chance But a trial By the axe The blade will fall through the neck Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh We stop at nothing on this trek Through the eyes of death the blade will thresh We stand trial For the acts In denial We swing the axe Defeat Adversary Requiem For the dream We stand Not a chance But a trial By the axe The blade will fall through the neck Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh We stop at nothing on this trek Through the eyes of death the blade will thresh Defeat adversary Any criticism is helpful, as I really would like to get into this band. If I can, I'll post the guitar tracks when they're done.
aweomse. very strong for a short song. you could add another verse. but don't listen to me if you feel otherwise. great job, and best of luck man.
Thank you. I sent the guy the scratch tracks I made for it, and he says I'm most likely in. Here's the track. Be warned, I did it in about 10 minutes, so it's really rough. http://media.putfile.com/For-The-Acts-By-The-Axe