Force of Mind (Linkin Park Inspired Song)

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    theycallmepraya

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    http://www.divshare.com/download/17491095-82a

    this rock band called 'Corpuscle' hit me up wanting to do some sort of collaboration. They sent me an demo-instrumental of a track called Force of Mind they've been working on. Tried to channel some Mike Shinoda on this one. Hope I did it justice. I know the drums/singing/bass-line need work but that's not really on me. (its them) lol i just laid down the vocals. so yea, tell me what you think.
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    I like it, sounds good.
     
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    thanks man
     
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    The track has potential I think. The singing needs improved A LOT. Your verses were definitely the best parts of the songs. Would have been better if the track was all you, honestly.
     
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    Yeah, the track was pretty lackluster instrumental wise, but that's something the band has to work on. You were just fine. :)
     
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    Whoa. What's up with those chorus vocals? It started out sounding legit until then.
     
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    Yeah I feel like the chorus needs more power, or more aggression and the instrumental as stated could use work but your verses were pretty beast.
     
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    Lmao yea thanks guys, that's pretty much the reaction I've been getting all around. Lol I'm hoping they fix it, i think it has potential to be a dope song.
     

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