Garden of Autumn

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    Akidfrompa

    Akidfrompa Well-Known Member

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    The sky, a lovely shade of gray
    As the leaves dance away

    I can remember the innocence
    And now I see today
    The garden blooming memories

    That never will be again

    There is a hope for tomorrow
    Hanging at the end of the sky
    Waiting to move further away

    The lake is portrait
    A beautiful shade of sorrow
    Begging me to call it home

    As time steps on
    I call for its embrace

    Such a beautiful night
    Such a precious memory
    I bid you farewell

    And so I see;
    Hope is a butterfly
    Fluttering away from my grasp.

    There is a hope for tomorrow
    Hanging at the end of the sky
    Waiting to move further away

    There is a scream for mercy
    That wasn't heard
    The lake holds me still
    Will I ever return?

    To see the sunrise
    To say goodbye?
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    You are really writing things close to me recently. The idea of hopelessness has really consumed me. As has the idea of suicide.

    Great work. I can never write so well in free verse like that.
     

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