Gone For Good

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    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

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    I've finished folding baskets of laundry that aren't my own.
    I've finished looking so hard for someplace to call home.
    I'm not sure where I'm headed,
    I'll make this the day you've dreaded.

    Run away from this place, it isn't home,
    Run away find a place to call my own.
    Gone for good now,
    I won't miss you, and I'll never look back.
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    Wow, this one's pretty short but it says so much... I've always admired ppl who are able to say that much with just a few words. This one's really deep. You've got some real talent! ^_^
    amazing work, please keep writing!
     
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    bleeding rose

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    I agree with "diamond" but if you tried to expand it ...i bet it would be amazing (just a thought lol)
    Anyways its rly powerful and not many people can do that so well done ;)
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Thanks guys.

    This one was really me letting out a whole lotta steam in a little bi of time, so I'm glad it turned out good.

    <3 Elaine
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good stuff.
     

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