goodbye

I'm just average and I'm not cool
But you were always the one looking like a fool
When you never even noticed me
But I'm sue I'll be missed when I'm gone
So if nobody likes me
I mind as well just die
And now as I think
Of this life I've lived
I've lived it well
So I take my life
All because you never noticed me

So why don't you
look me in my face
and tell me the truth
about me
Just once...Before I die

I never realized all the #### people thought of me
So im saying goodbye to my hell
So im saying goodbye to this hipocrisy
So im still sayign goodbye
Im just saying goodbye
GOodbye
Ive had enough of you
NOne of this is worth it
SO just left me leave and be in peace

(chorus)
So why don't you
look me in my face
and tell me the truth
about me
Just once...Before I die

{Bridge}
Im leaving
All to go to a better place
Im leaving
JUst to get away from this disgrace
ANd now im leaving.......im gone

(CHrous)

 

too repetitive. you're stretching out the same thing. how many different ways can you say "goodbye i'm dying?" you could have set up a longer story, or added more details as to why you're saying "goodbye" rather than just keep saying "good bye, i'm dying, hey don't forget i'm dying, i'm going to hell, i don't need you, oh yeah and i'm dying too." all i know is that someone never noticed you, you could have talked about how much you liked them and that kind of crap. :chemist: