Gun kills man / Man kills earth

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Please tell me what you think

    EDIT: changed the title!
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    When friends are lost:

    The city lights burn,
    you swallow them whole
    The only thing keeping us warm at night

    The ash and the ember
    bled from the sky,
    driving us home
    On our own / all alone

    We keep falling, falling
    Faster,faster
    We keep falling, falling
    in your eyes
    We keep falling, falling
    Faster, faster
    We keep falling, falling
    out of sight

    The sky has stopped bleeding,
    the city is burnt
    These scars and the memories are all we have left

    The sirens are screaming
    they're taking you in
    and I walk home
    On my own / all alone

    We keep falling, falling
    Faster,faster
    We keep falling, falling
    in your eyes
    We keep falling, falling
    Faster, faster
    We keep falling, falling
    out of sight

    Our world's descending faster
    every day
    Our world is falling, falling,
    falling away

    Our world's descending faster
    every day
    Our world is falling, falling,
    falling away
     
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    El Muerto

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    It's pretty good, I'd really like to hear those lyrics in a song. The only thing I don't like is the title.
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Thank you ^_^

    Not too happy with the title either...I'm still working on it :)
     
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    Incze

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    Good work! i agree with Dusan it would be sweet as a song but it just needs a new title! Keep up the good work though!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    I already changed the title...and I'm not changing it again. I'm happy with it now.

    Still, thank you ^_^
     

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