Haunted By Existence

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    Mr. Benzedrine

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    Haunted By Existence

    V1.I've been haunted all my life by things that dont exist
    I see you walking by and it's you i have missed
    So walk away againand don't ever come back
    I'll be haunted by you all my life until this existence can come back.

    xChorusx

    Well i know you won't come back, 'Cos i know you don't exist
    I see you in my dreams, In the place i can trust.

    V2.You will never agree with the things i have said because you make them up in your head
    Well i'd try and make you understand but by then i'd be dead.

    It's not really done yet but i'll edit it in when i do finish.
     
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    Amanda

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    It's a pretty solid start. I personally like this one better than the other one so far, but that's just my opinion.
     
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    Mr. Benzedrine

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    Yeah it kinda goes downhill. I'm gonna change alot of it i think, But thank you.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    I think so too.
     

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