Helium (Original Lyrics/Written Work)

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    RyRy

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    Here's something I've written recently. It's somewhat personal, and I would greatly appreciate any type of feedback, whether you love it or not, please let me know! :)

    Helium
    When suns fade, and ashes fall apart
    When lives give their never ending hearts
    To take it all away, I'd rather not have found them
    But where would I have gone, a winding path with one deadly end

    My mind, it caves inside me
    My hate, it taunts behind me
    My strength, it fights against me
    What would you do?
    What could I do?

    Once we're drawn together
    Not a soul will tear us part
    We fly up, against the odds
    Souring through the clouds

    And as we fall down under
    You're lost and I am found
    No one to bring us closer
    Steady winds shall keep their mark

    When suns, fade and ashes fall apart
    When lives, give their never ending hearts
    To take it all away, I'd rather not have found them
    But where would I have gone, a winding path with one deadly end
     
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    Erica

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    Pretty :)
     
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    It's dark, but I love dark art. Great job! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. :)
     

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